Once upon a time there was an explorer called Snorlax.

Snorlax has super great eyesight so he can see enemies from far away. Snorlax has opened thousands of fabulous treasure chests. he found lots of money and gold in the treasure chests.

But then one day Snorlax got caught by the police because they wanted his riches. But lucky Snorlax was in a tree having breakfast and the police could not get up.

The police tried to get up the tree but they kept falling on their butts.

The police finally gave up and went back to the police station. That meant that Snorlax could keep exploring.

The End     

Here is the fist draft written by Jake before he typed it up on the computer: